Simple, Succinct, & Sufficient, is always good. Look at what it has done for Google.
I realize that you are still working on the site, but one piece of advice I would offer is not to have dead links on your site or links to pages that are "Under Construction" when you are ready for prime-time.
You may also want to look into using CityDesk. It is a content management software tool for websites. They have a free starter addition. I've heard a lot of good things about it.
I like it. The shadowing around the letters makes it easier to read. The ONLY problem I see is that the word "now" in the subtitle is hard to decipher.