My greatest issue with this work is Ward's rhetorical style. Generally speaking, he follows this format:
1. Anecdote
2. Applies anecdote to broader group
3. Concludes argument based on his anecdotal experience
This is a great rhetorical strategy, but I'm not sure it actually gives the reader an accurate picture of the discussion related to the KJV. For every person Ward references who can't read the KJV, somebody can find an example of one who can. This points to the reality that comprehensibility is not the main reason people read Bibles, especially those who consider themselves students of the Scriptures. People that desire to involve themselves in study and even those who simply read the Bible casually are going to encounter new words in just about every translation, even the NIV (e.g. ephod, myrtles, offal, vaunts, etc.) Ward builds the case that our Bibles should be near-perfectly comprehensible from the very first read, while neglecting to point out that every Christian is going to have to learn new words regardless of which translation they have in their hands. I think most people will agree that the KJV requires reaching deeper into this department, but the claim he makes that the KJV is incomprehensible is confounding, especially since many of his videos are dedicated to actually explaining what words mean in the KJV and how they are comprehensible. I have been a harsh critic of Ward, largely because I do not appreciate how his rhetorical strategies come off as disingenuous. The central component of the debate does not appear to be comprehensibility, but rather the underlying textual discussion. As a final point, and to offer my own anecdote into the record, every person I have read the KJV to who was of Ward's opinion has been surprised at just how easy it was to understand. And that is one my chief complaints with Ward, whether intentional or not, he gives the impression that opening the KJV is akin to opening Beowulf of Chaucer. The reality is, most people with a high school education and even lower will not struggle terribly through the English text of the KJV.