Wondering Your Thoughts

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I think that the intro could be shortened up. Also some of the fonts and moving words are distracting, but I like what you're doing.
 
Yeah, the intro was too long. Some viewers will give up before the preaching begins. Also, you have to watch carefully for misspellings if you're going to make it all text. I caught two, and that was with the words moving awfully quickly.

You know, it seldom hurts to try all sorts of things to get people to listen to a sermon, or even sample a piece of one. God uses his word. Yet I'm not sure a two-minute clip will ordinarily give a whole lot of return for the effort involved, unless the preacher and what was said were exceptionally poignant.
 
what you thoughts were about this style of video.

My thoughts are that someone has a new toy and they are trying to see how many tricks it can do. I confess I cut it off after a minute 15.

On further reflection - it reminds me of the pseudo psychedelic videos from the late 60s when everyone wanted to be hip.
 
Hello Jeremy. It maybe should carry a warning "warning, watching this clip could cause seizures". I don't suffer from anything but it did my eyes and head in trying to follow it and immediately it came to my mind about some programs that have fast moving graphics and lighting or colours the warnings I have seen before them concerning that matter.
 
Hi Jeremy,

If I may, I'd like to offer a few suggestions. Video production is a major aspect of my work and something I do on a weekly basis, so perhaps this might be helpful.

First, good job. Looks like you're getting a good grasp of using the software. May I ask what program you were using? Are you on a Mac or PC. Some of the effects looked like Motion, but others I wasn't so familiar with. I assume, though, if you're using Motion then you're probably using Final Cut.

-I would agree with others on the intro. I would shorten it just a bit.

-Good job timing out the words with your pastor's message. That's always a hard thing to get right. One thing you might consider is intentionally lengthening pauses in the clip so that the frame doesn't change immediately after the last word appears. A couple of times the word appeared and then the frame jumped and I wasn't able to read it. You can do this in any video production program, which is one of the reasons these types of videos typically have some kind of ambient music going on the background, so that the pauses don't just sound like empty space. So you might consider some light, non-distracting music.

-One of the big rules of graphic design/videography which I work in is avoid too many fonts. I've done videos like this before and I never use more than two fonts. I typically have one main font that is for 90% of the text and then another one that contrasts to emphasize key words (i.e. "Bible, Christ, Gospel, Love, etc.") There were a couple of points in the sound clip where this could be really effective.

-Effects: They're so much fun, but like fonts, can be a distraction. Also like fonts, I rarely use more than two types of text effects in this type of video, one for 90% of the general text, and perhaps one more to accent or emphasize key words.

-The same rule applies for use of colors. Simplicity is better.

I hope I have not come across hyper-critical. Overall, excellent work, but keep working at it and keep progressing. Don't get discouraged. I pray you can continue to serve in this way.

Thomas
 
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